Changeset 10894 for dotorg/trunk/html

Timestamp:

02/19/2008 04:03:15 PM (8 months ago)

Author:

dave

Message:

word smithing.

Location:

dotorg/trunk/html/beps

Files:

• bep_0008.html (modified) (4 diffs)
• bep_0008.rst (modified) (3 diffs)

dotorg/trunk/html/beps/bep_0008.html

@@ -58 +58 @@
 <p class="topic-title first">Contents</p>
 <ul class="simple">
-<li><a class="reference internal" href="#announce-parameters" id="id8">Announce Parameters</a></li>
+<li><a class="reference internal" href="#announce" id="id8">Announce</a></li>
 <li><a class="reference internal" href="#announce-response" id="id9">Announce Response</a></li>
 <li><a class="reference internal" href="#obfuscation-method" id="id10">Obfuscation Method</a></li>
@@ -79 +79 @@
 &quot;SHOULD NOT&quot;, &quot;RECOMMENDED&quot;, &quot;MAY&quot;, and &quot;OPTIONAL&quot; in this document are
 to be interpreted as described in IETF <a class="reference external" href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2119">RFC 2119</a> <a class="footnote-reference" href="#id6" id="id7">[5]</a>.</p>
-<div class="section" id="announce-parameters">
-<h1>Announce Parameters</h1>
+<div class="section" id="announce">
+<h1>Announce</h1>
 <p>When using this extension, instead of passing the <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">info_hash</span></tt> parameter
 to the tracker, a <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">sha_ih</span></tt> is passed.</p>
@@ -92 +92 @@
 <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">kO%89%A5N-%27%EC%D7%E8%DA%05%B4%AB%8F%D9%D1%D8%B1%19</span></tt>.</p>
 <p>If the <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">sha_ih</span></tt> is passed then the value for the <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">port</span></tt> parameter
-should be treated as a 16 bit integer and must be obscured in the same
-manner as the peer list as described in the <a class="reference internal" href="#obfuscation-method">Obfuscation Method</a>
-section.  Similarly if the optional <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">ip</span></tt> parameter is passed in the
-announce then its value MUST also be so oscured.</p>
+should be treated as a 16 bit integer and MUST be obscured as
+described in the <a class="reference internal" href="#obfuscation-method">Obfuscation Method</a> section.  Similarly if the
+optional <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">ip</span></tt> parameter is passed in the announce then its value
+MUST also be so obscured.</p>
 <p>This extension does not change the semantics of any parameter passed
 in the peer's announce.</p>
@@ -111 +111 @@
 <div class="section" id="obfuscation-method">
 <h1>Obfuscation Method</h1>
-<p>The values for the``ip`` and <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">port</span></tt> announce parameters, the
+<p>The values for the <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">ip</span></tt> and <tt class="docutils literal"><span class="pre">port</span></tt> announce parameters, the
 <em>returned peer list</em> and any other values that contain peer
 information are obscured using the method described in this section.</p>

dotorg/trunk/html/beps/bep_0008.rst

@@ -23 +23 @@
 
 
-Announce Parameters
-===================
+Announce
+========
 
 When using this extension, instead of passing the ``info_hash`` parameter
@@ -41 +41 @@
 
 If the ``sha_ih`` is passed then the value for the ``port`` parameter
-should be treated as a 16 bit integer and must be obscured in the same
-manner as the peer list as described in the `Obfuscation Method`_
-section.  Similarly if the optional ``ip`` parameter is passed in the
-announce then its value MUST also be so oscured.
+should be treated as a 16 bit integer and MUST be obscured as
+described in the `Obfuscation Method`_ section.  Similarly if the
+optional ``ip`` parameter is passed in the announce then its value
+MUST also be so obscured.
 
 This extension does not change the semantics of any parameter passed
@@ -64 +64 @@
 ==================
 
-The values for the``ip`` and ``port`` announce parameters, the
+The values for the ``ip`` and ``port`` announce parameters, the
 *returned peer list* and any other values that contain peer
 information are obscured using the method described in this section.